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| BENCHMARK 1: It should
be memorable |
Memorability has to do with the ability the line has to be
recalled unaided. A lot of this is based on the brand heritage
and how much the line has been used over the years. But if
it is a new line, what makes it memorable? I suggest it is
the story told in the advertisement - the big idea.
The more the line resonates with the big idea, the more
memorable it will be. 'My goodness, my Guinness!', as well
as being a slick line, was made memorable by the illustrations
of the Guinness drinker seeing his pint under some sort
of threat (perched on the nose of a performing seal, for
example). It invoked a wry smile and a tinge of sympathy
on the part of the audience at the potential loss if the
Guinness was dropped.
If it is successful, ideally the line should
pass readily into common parlance as would a catchphrase,
such as 'Beanz meanz Heinz' or 'Where's the beef?'
In addition to a provocative and relevant illustration or
story, alliteration, coined words, puns and rhymes are good
ways of making a line memorable, as is a jingle.
Let's look at some examples of these:
We'll look at rhymes
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| Alliteration |
| This technique is a familiar aide-memoire. |
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Allied Irish Bank: |
Britain's
best business bank. |
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| Doral: |
Discover the Doral difference. |
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| Jaguar: |
Don't dream it. Drive it. |
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| Girl
Guides: |
Dream. Dare. Do. |
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| Fila: |
Functional... Fashionable...
Formidable... |
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| Hire
Knowledge: |
Specialized staffing solutions. |
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| Coined words |
| Using made-up words can also help. |
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| Amoy: |
Chineasy. |
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| Louis
Vuitton: |
Epileather. |
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| Burton
Menswear: |
Everywear. |
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| Ski
Fruit: |
Fruitius. Yogurtus. Delicia. |
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| Guinness: |
Guinnless isn't good for
you. |
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| Gordon's
& Tonic: |
Innervigoration. |
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| Neff: |
Nefficiency. |
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| KP
Peanuts: |
Pure snacking. Pure snacktivity. |
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| Smarties: |
WotalotIgot! |
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| Puns
in the line, no branding |
| A really good pun can work miracles.
However note the lack of brand identity in these otherwise
excellent examples. Almost any competing brand could use these
lines. |
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| Moss
Security: |
Alarmed?
You should be. |
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| Wyborowa
Vodka: |
Enjoyed
for centuries straight. |
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| Pioneer: |
Everything
you hear is true. |
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| The
Economist: |
For top
laps. |
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| Range
Rover: |
It's how
the smooth take the rough. |
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| Holiday
Inn: |
Pleasing
people the world over. |
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| Casio: |
Precisely
what you're looking for. |
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| Weight
Watchers Frozen Meals: |
Taste.
Not waist. |
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| Northern
Telecom: |
Technology
the world calls on. |
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| Zanussi: |
The appliance
of science. |
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| Lea
& Perrins: |
The Worcester
Saucerer. |
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| Bendix
Appliances: |
We'll
do the homework. |
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| Puns
in the line, with brand name |
In these lines, the brand name
appears, but as the
solution or promise rather than part of the fun. |
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| Flowers
Fine Ales: |
Always
pick Flowers. |
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| Barbados: |
Barbados.
Goodness. Gracious. |
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| Finish
Detergent: |
Brilliant
cleaning starts with Finish. |
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| British
Steel: |
British
Steel: British mettle. |
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| First
National Bank of Chicago: |
First
relationships last. |
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| Kenco
Really Rich Coffee: |
Get Rich
quick. |
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| St.
Ivel Shape Yogurt: |
Get your
family into Shape, without them even noticing. |
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| Kodak
Gold: |
Is your
film as good as Gold? |
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| Asda: |
It 'asda
be Asda. |
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| HMV: |
No HMV,
no video. |
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| Ritz
Crackers: |
Nothing
fitz like a Ritz. |
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| John
Deere Tractors: |
Nothing
runs like a Deere |
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| Mumm's
Champagne: |
One word
captures the moment. Mumm's the word. |
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| Money
Magazine: |
Reap the
rewards of Money. |
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| Red
Star: |
Send your
parcels Red Star and pull out all the stops. |
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| Tetley
Tea: |
Tetley
make teabags make tea. |
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| Tic
Tac Candy: |
Tic Tac.
Surely the best tactic. |
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| Impulse
Deodorant: |
You just
can't help acting on Impulse. |
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| Puns
in the line, with brand name at work |
Here the brand goes to work, inextricably
part of
the pun. |
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| Absolut
Vodka: |
Absolut
magic. |
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| Citibank: |
Because
the Citi never sleeps. |
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| Frosted
Chex: |
Chexellent,
or what? |
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| Quavers
Snacks: |
Do me
a Quaver. |
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| Thomas
Cook: |
Don't
just book it, Thomas Cook it. |
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| Nytol
Sleeping Pills: |
Good mornings
follow a good Nytol. |
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| IBM: |
I think,
therefore IBM. |
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| Abbey
National Building Society: |
Investments
with Abbey endings. |
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| Cutty
Sark Whisky: |
Live a
Cutty above. |
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| Comet
Electrical Stores: |
Lowering
prices forever, that's Comet sense. |
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| Arthur's
Cat Food: |
Nothing
else is Arthur's good. |
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| Skoda
Favorit: |
Put your
money on the Favorit. |
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| Farley's
Baby Food: |
So Farley's,
so good. |
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| Thomas
Cook Travel: |
Take a
Thomas Cook at our prices! |
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| Immac
Depilatory: |
The look
is Immac-ulate |
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| Visa
Delta Debit Card: |
Visa's
Delta blow to cheques |
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| Cadbury's
Wispa Candy: |
You can't
keep quiet about a Wispa |
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| Campari
Aperitif: |
You'll
find there is no Camparison. |
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| Wike
Farms Cheese: |
You'll
Wike it too. |
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